Set in Stone

EDIT : New version up , as per the feedback of the first 4 comments : no organ solo :), different lead amps, slightly more bass, slightly thicker vocals. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Finally started finishing the vox on the new songs, before I pack my bags / studio and set sail... An attempt at loud ear-scathing pop candy :)..Needs to be heard loud ! LYRICS <VERSE> It's been - 2 hours That is - quite long Answer - the phone Hear this - new song <CHORUS> Are you all alone Answer your fuckin phone We're both on our own 2 hearts set in stone <BRIDGE> X 4 The night gets long I can't finish my song It's been too long Same riffs go on and on <VERSE> She's a - colleague Just an - old friend Nothing - like that I know - nonsense <CHORUS> Are you all alone Answer your fuckin phone We're both on our own 2 hearts set in stone Link (download or stream) - Revised :

First, I really like it, but when the organ comes it feels out of sync (I really do like the organ though).

I like the sound of the mix first off. Really bold. Think it could use just a tad more bass though, I literally mean just a touch. Kick sounds great though. and yeah, like MS said, that out-of-synch thing is really noticeable when the kick comes in with the organ.

Thanx for the feedback ! I will try to do something abouf that organ part which was totally unedited unquantized single take playd on my laptop keyboard - added at the last minute to fill in that particular section. I dont know whether to keep the part clear or add a theremin or a violon or redo the organ.

balanced mix, i can relate to the lyrics. don't like the lead guitar sound, personally. and the vocals are definitely playing second fiddle to the guitar tone and a bit too hipassed, but all elements are pretty clear in the mix. catchy song.

New version as per the above feedback is up : Also updated the original post. Changes : no more organ solo :), different lead amps, slightly more bass, slightly thicker vocals. Thank you all for your feedback.

Damn it! put back the organ!!! :) I really like this, but i really, really miss the organ:) Couldn't put my finger on it on the last listen,but now.. sounds like Gary Neuman without synths.

I didn't hear the version with the organ, but this is a nice song you have going on there! from 2:45 or so, that little dirty solo lit something under my arse.. I like it a lot, for sure :)